Website Review - Grammar check ha!

[axel132132]

Ok so,

I had a site previous which i asked you all to review, now after spending days reading how to do SEO ive had to make a new website which is more optimized for google!

Criticism muchly appreciated need to check all spelling, grammar, what you would change.. Etc etc so that it can be 100% perfection!

Cheers All

Electrician In Woking | Electrician Huddersfield

 

[axel132132]

Umm my last site got LOADS of critisisam must have finally cracked it haha!

 

[Strima]

Do you do any LED stuff by any chance?

 

[Kamikaze]

Where is the “Follow us on http://www.electriciansforums.net” button?

 

[Silly Sausage]

Mmmm, Axel, looks OK with a quick scan.
One suggestion on the areas covered, remove Manchester...

 

[Richard Burns]

Couple of points:
LED upgrade? why do you want to upgrade LEDs, surely you want to upgrade to LEDs
Request us reward? possibly a refer us or a recommend us reward?

Green text to remove, red text to insert, blue text to correct.
LED lighting has been around for some years now, but recently due to the rising raising energy bills LED products have been in more commonly used which has meant means that they are becoming more readily available and affordable.


Unicorn Electrical, Electrician Huddersfield and Electrician Woking can offer you an affordable upgrade from your current lighting to LED. The new LED floodlights produce 250-300 watts of power light (Though actually a 10W fitting is about equivalent to a 60-100W incandescent) from just a 10 watt LED fitting which will have a large impact on your energy bills. So as the energy companies keep raising their prices, lower your bill by installing LED products.


You could also raise the profile of your contact details, this is the key information someone will need and it is all small text. It is good that it is on every page.
Personally I dislike the term electrics used to refer to electrical installation.

On your twitter you refer to mainsboards, try using at least fuse box or preferably consumer unit (though many will not know what that is!)

Hope it helps, the site is a major improvement on the last one!