UK Revising my CV, and looking for feedback!

[Pegasus]

Hello, I am trying to improve my CV and would like to ask for feedback for the role of Electrician Mate/Improver.
Don't want it to be in the public forum, so could private PM the person offering to have a peak at it.

I would like to also create a website portfolio where I add pictures of work done to prove to employer I possess certain skills,
would that be of any help in this industry?

 

[yung_kio]

Hello, I am trying to improve my CV and would like to ask for feedback for the role of Electrician Mate/Improver.
Don't want it to be in the public forum, so could private PM the person offering to have a peak at it.

I would like to also create a website portfolio where I add pictures of work done to prove to employer I possess certain skills,
would that be of any help in this industry?

What feedback did you get?

Im in the same position as you