I'm far from being an expert in English language but here are a few examples I don't understand :
These two requirements seem to be the same thing to me:
Protective Bonding Conductors securely connected and a warning label fitted
Protective Bonding securely connected and a warning label fitted if required
Why does this need to be listed twice?
Where is the check for "Insulation of live parts"? This seems pretty important to me as any failure of this requirement would almost certainly warrant a code 1
Some lines are questions, some are statements or headings, some are sentences, some are none of these. Bracketing is sometimes used and capitalisation is at best irregular.
Why should an inspection report carried out to BS7671 as declared in section C, need to comply with requirements that are outside the scope of this standard? for example, why is it a defect of BS7671 if accessories are not "neatly aligned"? Why should a check for compliance with Approved Document M be necessary, and not any other Approved Document?
How far beyond the scope of BS7671 should a PIR go?