What on earth is the objection to 3 x 13A sockets off of a 16 radial, or am I missing something?
The last pic on the EICR is presumably to show the lack of a cpc to the metal back box. Although I still fit them on every new fitting, they have not been a requirement for some time, as long as one of the back box lugs is 'fixed'.
Time expired smoke alarms should be pointed out to the customer, and and possibly an offer made to replace them, but they are NOTHING to do with an EICR, and shouldn't be mentioned, other than anything relevant to their mains connection
13, in the observations, referring to the plastic consumer unit is (deliberately?) alarmist and misleading and inaccurate. There are reason to advise that the CU should be changed, and the quote should give that option, but the existing CU complies with the 18th, in that it complied with the current regulations when it was installed. All that the 18th states (escape routes excepted) i that you can't fit a NEW non fire resistant CU.